Barcelona

I want to tell you about a special Spanish city I visited last holidays with my parents - Barcelona, and about its special places like the Sagarda Familia, La Rambla and the Gaudí buildings.

Barcelona is located in northern Spain in a district called Catalunya, so except Spanish, most of the Barcelona's citizens also speak a language called Catalan. The city was built by Hercules and was rebuilt by Carthaginian Hamilcar Barca, the father of Hannibal. Barcelona offers many shops and wide, crowded avenues, but also historical buildings and astonishing churches. The Sagarda Familia is no doubt the most impressive of them. Though not beautiful, this church is amazingly huge and the whole buiding is covered with thousands of details, sculptures and artistic symbols.

Barcelona also offers, like I mentioned, wide avenues, full of shops and cafes. The most signicifant one is La Rambla. Besides places to shop, it also offers still sculptures, entertainers and painters. It's a beautiful place. Barcelona also has many buildings of the architect Antoni Gaudí, like Park Güell, the Casa Milà and the Casa Batlló, which are full of many colors and works of art. I also found the citizens of Barcelona very nice and kind.

To conclude, I had a perfect time in Barcelona and I would like to visit there again, because I don't feel I saw everything interesting in this very large city. I also think that if you want the perfect vacation; a mixture between "Art Nouveau" buildings, Gothic churches, very big parks and wide shopping avenues, you should visit Barcelona.

Excellent work, Omer!

Now, let me give you a piece of advise. The body of your essay was too "crowded" and had to be divided. I did that for you. Next time you write an essay, think of the structure and divide your writing into as many paragraphs as needed.

Daphna.